toxic soup

yep, on that train

Treading
in your
toxic
soup
I can
barely breathe
the air -
I cannot
touch
bottom
nor sides
for fear
of them
sucking
me in.

Reviews

[Chris]

Some thoughts just have to have their own "voice".

[zephyr]

Short and to the point, most awesome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can be so poisoned by others if we let them sink us in their toxins...

[Frieda P]

I heard the train whistle coming before I even got here....suck'd me in too. Right on point as always...

[Lyn Anderson]

I wish you would come back here.