A handme down gift

inspired by my blanket girl

Life is a handme down gift
she said to me --
treasure the moments
of life
we all share
sitting beside
the fire
tonight
in our handme down life.

Author's Note

My 7 year old daughter dictated this poem to me. I thought it was pretty good. She picked the image from stock fire images too.

Reviews

[B.J]

Brilliantly said so clever.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is my daughter's poem, thank you.

[B.J]

It was beautiful anyway.

[Bluefire]

She's definitely a poet. Runs in the blood I guess.
She did great, kudos to her. =3

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. Yes. I am pretty proud of her.

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[TL Boehm]

wow this is definitely a keeper then. Well done

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I am very proud of my daughter.

[Delmar Cooper]

Now that I have discovered the way to delete all those read requests from two people (over 50) I can keep up.

Apologies for being late to find this.

Your daughted is blessed in many ways.

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, thanks, I don't send out many read requests, but for my baby I do.

[s y e]

Wow, I can see your daughter is going to be a great writer like you. This was amazing for a 7 year old to write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much

[Butch Decatoria]

Beautiful poem and deeply warm.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. My daughter appreciates it.

[New Theory]

Elegant and soft poem , good job

[Lyn Anderson]

My daughter appreciates all the reviews

[New Theory]

You are welcome :) and god bless her

[Sami Khalil]

A great poem from this talented young lady...Bravo.....................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much, I appreciate that.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a wonderful and endearing write!...

I think your daughter is onto something... we should all cherish "handme downs"..it is indeed a gift...

A fabulous write... A sweet Collaboration, if you will. ~xoxo~:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot, she is loving all these reviews.