Beautiful imagery. I really like this poem and it flows so well. It is very sad but it is not just sad it so honest that there is almost something nostalgic about...like I have felt this, lived it. It i very relate able. Great write.
This 'M' has a taste of darkness and regret in its melancholly voice. A gulf away from your usual offerings! But it is tight and crisp and flows well to paint that picture.
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