Dreams of Morning Angels

inspired by the song, among other things ...

continuing the dance

I sink deep into your skin
pressing urgently upon you
nails tracing letters that
I know you can feel ...

you are

aware of the words
I trace there.

and so,

we
continue
to dance.

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                   seeping through the cracks

touching moments
you struggle to
replace your soft
by being hard --
but still,
it seeps
through
the cracks
of you.

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you have yours
and I have mine
only time will
tell if the two
combine.

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Peaceful journey

you can drive me
anywhere --
the windows down
and I dream
Angel of the Morning
wondering
what could
have been
and what
still
might
be

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Perhaps I'm not the only one that's been in experimental mode lately haha An interesting layout...it fits, but I can't explain why it does...it has a suite-like feel to it...love this one.

[Lyn Anderson]

ah, my friend, I write a lot of collections. This is just the first one you noticed. This is how I started out, several poems on one page. I started posting them like this in the spring, every once in a while. Glad you enjoyed.

[kublakhan27]

Yeah I've fallen behind on my reading and I'm sure I've missed a lot of 'new' poems as of late...I feel bad about it but you know how it is...sometimes the concentration level just isn't where it needs to be to give due diligence to the work of others...I'm actually considering a break from things right now...

[Lyn Anderson]

I saw that. Whatever you need to do for you.

[Rene Salinas]

This has a dance like quality and I am always taken back by KL's attitude is like whatever the challenge "I am in " sort of thing. In here the seemingly desinhibited nature of letting go to meet the other. And the oh , juts drive becuase as long as we are together we will be alright.

What is the future made of? imagination , inspiration and intuitions is my guess.

Great feeling.

[Lyn Anderson]

I had a lovely feeling when I wrote it.:)

[Frieda P]

You know I love the dance, they're all apropos but first one is a winner. I'm old enough to face the dawn, whatever that means.....

[Lyn Anderson]

Whatever the consequence tomorrow the moment tonight is right

[Frieda P]

Yes, that spells trouble....

[ANM]

Lovely words inspired by a. Lovely song!!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much.

[ANM]

Your very welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of thoughts and words. I like the set-up of poem. You led the reader to the levels of romance and love. I like the complete poem. You create questions for love and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

You are welcome. So glad you stopped in. Always a pleasure to read your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm working extra. Trying to squeeze in reading time. I always find time to read your wonderful poetry and thoughts.