Time (10W+1)

his favourite thing to say - no one got the inside joke so I added on the extra W

 

Time will tell,
he says

so far
the b***h isn't
tocking.

Author's Note

don't think too hard.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

you pack a lot in this little treasure .. i thought the (10W) meant words but since counting has not escaped me yet (at least up to 20) i am wrong .. since you admonish not to think too hard i will simply puzzle over it for a bit ..
i agree with John Gabriel adding that there is also humor .. what a gem of a poem
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

Let's just say one word doesn't count. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

:)) OK! ... poetic license is just all right by me! gotta love it!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

Great play on words "tocking" for "talking"....loved it. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I appreciate that.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is harsh, brutal and very cleverly done. So much venom in such a small bite!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks sometimes my comedy has bite.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Very clever...ha-ha! I enjoy your mind quips so much!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

Haha! This really did make me chuckle aloud, KL! Thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you I appreciate it.

[DoormanDan]

HA! I see what you did there! That was pretty funny!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, just lightening it up a bit.