Everyday poetry

I can't stop smiling - on review comments by Barley Girl

You make me feel

everyday poetry,

from the corners of my lips

to the tips of my toes

and all the parts

over, under, and in between --

 

I melt for you,

in my heart

and in your bed,

I sigh for you

in each pore,

and in my head ...

 

It's so simple, can't you see,

you make me feel poetry,every day.

I can't stop smiling,

because I know now,

this is the way

love's supposed to be.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Every day should be like a weeping willow tree... feeling the tease of each little breeze.
Being in love can be a new feeling of love at first sight... with the morning light. truly, Pat

[Lyn Anderson]

and so it is. thank you

[Jon Roggie]

Margie has that kind of touch. Makes you want to tell a story!

[Lyn Anderson]

yes she does. thank you! Muah!

[John the Baptist]

This one is a hymn to that kind of love called head over heels. Everything is coming up roses in the relationship, which is the way "love's supposed to be." It will mellow eventually, of course, but hopefully it won't turn into the combat zone some relationships degenerate into. Joy does not have to slip into rage unless we allow it to.

[Lyn Anderson]

Is it the real deal if it's 5 years? thank you for reading

[Lorry]

Its always good to feel poetry in others, I think of the term effortless smile when I think of those people who make the days a little easier and sing to our thoughts.
I was going to point out a few wonderful lines, bit they are all A grade :)

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you so much.