the joyous ache of you

Inspired by comments on my recent works

someone once told me

that love can be a joyous ache -

that's something I never knew

until I met you.

but that's not all love does -

it lives and jumps and breathes

and stutters, stumbles, shakes

and quivers - it fills me, and spills

out onto the floor, it shivers

and pops, and crackles for more ...

On occasion, it sings in the shower.

and yes, for you

It aches ...

Author's Note

Reviews

[no more]

This is beautiful, and it snaps with the rhythm.

[Cassie]

Love sings in the shower this is so true

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you so much

[Robert Trakofler]

Yum:) enjoy those aches Lynne
pain pain pane... pleasure
and then
what a treasure:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping in

[redzone]

love that quiver and shaken and singing in the shower kind of love Lyn and to find it is just, just something else!!! your pen is alive and the paper just "sings" when it puts words on it....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

OMG...your words were written for this video, and the video was made JUST for Your Words. What a powerful love story!!! Yes, and the ACHE is real! Love your words, Lyn.

[Lyn Anderson]

I love it when I rate an OMG

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph)]

❤️ I’m a slobbering romantic and this is how I missed my wife during boot camp! ...so you deserve an OMG 😆

[Neville]

Perfectly poemed and oh' how bloomin true you are ma'am....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. You were (are) inspirational. :)

[Neville]

I came back for more .. because I can still crawl ..

[Chris Shaw]

Love is all you have said and more. That ache you have inside when you are away from the one you love, tells you how much they mean to you and how much you miss their company. Yes, I can understand that and singing in the shower too. Good to read you again Lyn.

Chris

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very welcome ache indeed...and if we take the good with the bad, the downs with the ups...
then we are really in love and really committed to a feeling that can last forever and a day.
quite the romantic write here.
j.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping in again