touch of the first time

Gazing at those sweet flowering fields outside my window..

i was reminded of the time when i first met my loved one..

the time when i was sitting between the same flowers

the sun kissed my face..

when he touched me for the first time...

Reviews

[msharma]

Great pen down a little more poems for us

[msharma]

looks as if a nature poem..skill need applauses...

[Heartswell.]

It's very simple, sort of like a haiku.
It's scenic and peaceful. I like that especially with the image of the flowers and the start of love.

[Sweets]

Nice poem =)

[No regret]

very nice .