In 120 seconds i fall in love with cat

In 120 seconds i fall in love with cat

A Poem by amol patil
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This poem is about a boy and cat that how they fall in love with cat in only 120 second

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IN 120 SECONDS I FALL IN LOVE WITH CAT

             -AMOL PATIL

 

 

At hours of daylight,

 A cat sits in the van of my dwelling

 

Her voice “miau…miau…” seems to be greedy

And by listening my heart become panicky

 

I didn't have milk in my domicile so I give her a biscuit

But, she didn't eat it

 

Now, her greedy voice much louder than the prior

And my heart panicky also than the prior

 

Then I manipulate over her backbone by slowly

By looking at her lovely 

 

Suddenly, the greedy voice stops

And my heart becomes full of ecstasy

 

But, I can’t fritter more time with her

So I have to flee her

 

As soon as I go far from her, the greedy voices initiate

And again, my heart grows to be miserable

 

I don’t know what is going on, Her beautiful brownish eyes

Is repeated in front of my eyes

 

But a far I knew the reason and that was

“In 120 seconds I fall in love with cat”

© 2014 amol patil


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Sweet story! It's so hard to walk away when an animal simply wants your attention and nothing else.

Posted 10 Years Ago


amol patil

10 Years Ago

Thanks... Andronicus
Stan Lee

10 Years Ago

Welcome anytime!
Keep writing... I have enjoyed both your pieces! :)
I loved it Amol! I did and I found humour in it; it is clever and unique. I could really see and hear this cat and imagine myself. Thank you. Keep writing. Very good work. Dale

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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amol patil

Baroda, India