few words

Few thoughts better left back there 

few words better left unsaid, sorrows.

Nah, i cant moist them eyes 

her words my life much of a sunset

her smiles disguise of my plight.

this plateau owes to my lies

Like a wicked rhyme my heart goes crook

when credit roles of her smiles.

Like they know the reason of her dry eyes.

Nah, they don`t know me or the yoke i`m under

when echoes of my envies act as a thunder.

Reviews

[Dipanjan Dutta]

liked it...good choiceof words and perfect lyricism...great work

[hardeep sabharwal]

good job,

artistic way of expression

[Namrata]

I sense a lot of ego in your write which is kinda good, I believe, it is like you rule a kingdom but can't quite call you the king. You are , no wonder , good with words.

[amrit]

i really liked the way u showed up with your thoughts .. u got the ego part :) thanx for reviewing it

[amrit]

thanx for taking your time out to review it..

[b4i8islept]

A very well thought out poem.