Memories That Still Hurt

I have lost this poem. Trying to re-create it... Help is welcome.

Reviews

[Yvonne Heidt]

Hasty decisions, selfish motives and impatience swallowed meUnderstanding oneself is not easy, at times...I love (hate?) when we get to a point in our lives when introspection leads us to these realizations. Wow. You put this onto paper beautifully. I still have memories that hurt and your writing brought them up. Anything that makes me physically feel what you have written - is excellent writing. Thanks.

[Conrad Wrobel]

oooh, strangely ominous. This is a very powerful piece, both for those who have experience similarly, and those that hope not too.
Cheers! XD
Xonrad Wrobel

[Gandré]

this I like, we make such mistakes.....we recognize them later. I voted for you.

[Ms. Belsito]

Real LOVE is, without doubt in me, not about GAMES.

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[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Such a melancholy poem.. this is heartbreaking.. so many times we do this when we are in love, the hasty descisions, selfish motives ect.
Very well written.

Chloe
xoxo

[Dorothy]

I like this one very much! It flows nicely and expresses your thoughts well. It is interesting when you have time to reflect on relationships.... just remember it does take 2. It might be one persons fault more than the other but usually both parties have some role in the destruction of the relationship.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Too often we take our loved one's for granted not realizing they might not always be there for us. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[James Mayfield]

Sounds oh so familiar. My friends thought I was crazy when an old girlfriend of mine monopolized my time. She gave me everything and I still managed to screw it up by not understanding what she wanted. A very moving and very understandable piece. Nice work.

[Ladysue]

Caffiene, as always you write exquisitly. This is so sad and to me, I think the sadest line is the one below because it speaks volumes as does the rest of this write.
:"ife had brought me a gift, whose worth I didn't realize. "

Great piece!!

[[Starshine] Faerie]

wow.
Your poetry is simply breathtaking.
It speaks so much wisdom, insight, and truth, with such flow, rhyme, and rhythm. I love it. I seriously love your writing immensely.

[Ryan Otto]

THat feeling of someone else justifying your existence, and not realizing it until their gone...nice