Memories That Still Hurt

I have lost this poem. Trying to re-create it... Help is welcome.

Reviews

[Yvonne Heidt]

Hasty decisions, selfish motives and impatience swallowed meUnderstanding oneself is not easy, at times...I love (hate?) when we get to a point in our lives when introspection leads us to these realizations. Wow. You put this onto paper beautifully. I still have memories that hurt and your writing brought them up. Anything that makes me physically feel what you have written - is excellent writing. Thanks.

[Michael Soul]

no one can use some one elseys words for their part of the soul and no mater how hard you look in on your self all that is at desposable is part of you and your words are good and true beauty is in ur soul

[Rain]

Man , I could have used those words last week, when I wrote " Last Dance with a Memory." It is exactly what happened, but the years have all but dimished the images of us. I promised there would always be a sacred spot in my heart for her..but I misjudged the power of time. Your piece was like it was part of that piece. Beautiful , and understood. Love, Rain..

[S. P. Vaporis]

sad that we love and then lose due to our own deep issues. keep in mind that there is some worth to the pain if we learn a lesson. ~peace~

[Rea]

letting go of the memories is the hardest thing to do ...thats why it still hurts..excellent write

[Dominick]

Excellent realization.
"Those dreams have turned into memories, memories that still hurt�"
The way things tend to progress in an unwanted scenario. Funny how we create such a scene for ourselves. Usually it takes a moment to step back and view what has gone on to realize our faults. By then its to late as the lesson has been pre-recorded.

"I'd tried to shut my eyes to it, but you finally found your way into my heart"

Time is of the essence. People scared from the past or unwelcoming of certain feelings take time to have the heart warmed. Usually when it does and acceptance is near, is usually when we are forced to realize our haste has caused dismay. Selfishness indeed, but usually it's there to protect ourselves. After all, we need to look out for numero uno.

[Brette Medb]

Very powerful.. but you must learn to forgive yourself, learn your lesson and move on or you will never find a love like this again... great write.


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[Sean M. Addams]

very emotional piece and very beautifully written..lots of good imagery and nice flow to this.. great job ..

[V. K. Harris]

Very sad but beautifully written.

[Nicole Renee]

It felt like I was experiencing those things. I remember how it is to have memories that I don't want to remember. XD Great poem!

[Jenny Davis]

Oh, I can certainly understand where you were coming from in this. You haved penned it so well and I agree that sometimes realizing our faults make it that much harder :)(: