Invaluable

Jorio

 

 

 

 

 

I would give anything

To have you back

But you’re worth more

Than all I have.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Picture, courtesy photo.net gallery

Thanks to Nicholas Hallows for the suggestion.

 

Author's Note

A Jorio is a form of poetry comprising of four lines with four words in each line.

Reviews

[Rain]

What is this guy doing now ? Is he laughing and having fun, living his life ? I hurt for you, but you also have to know in your heart he's not the only one. You pieces are so powerful, but I challege you to write of another man who touches your heart. Rain..

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a great piece of Jorio.

I wonder how could these four lines be so deep...
It is really damn powerful and expressing too much!
Brilliant write !

[Aries]

Wow...another awesome piece....Great writing as always....

[thecoolone52]

i like the 4 line short and to the point type writing........ the last line was my favorite....... nice work and the photo is really cool with the girl on the park bench..... tubular write

[Ladysue]

I always love your work. It is so powerful and speaks from the heart. Wow, this really says how strongly you feel. A heartbreaking piece. Great expression as always!!!!!! :)

[TamerQtaish]

4 simple lines!
Beautiful straight and honorable :)

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[Julie Dant]

Nice to learn of a Jorio. Thanks. And thanks also for the gift of sharing such a sort, but nevertheless profound piece of poetry.
Despair is palpatable in the last 2 linesl

[Serendipity]

What are you doing
Trying hard to break
My already broken heart
It cannot cry anymore

As always, short painful
Yet love your stuff
Thank you for sharing
Waiting patiently for more

[Nicholas Hallows]

Thank you for the education. This is a great little poem. It says everything it needs to.

If it was mine I would perhaps change the 'could' in the first line to 'would'. But it is yours, not mine. :). Either way it works.

NH