June 27, 2014

Rain falls from the night sky,

as I'm looking into your eyes.

We're sitting under a big tree
All alone, just you and me.

The moonlight shines from behind the clouds

and the thunder roars real loud.

You pull me close,

and kiss me.

The rain falls from the night sky,

as I look into your eyes.

I realized then, that I loved you.

I loved everything about you.

I loved you just like I loved the night,

the rain, and the sky.

Reviews

[writer_gurl28]

its a very good peom but you could use more discriptive words to show a little more emotion but overall its quite lovely

[Wild Rose]

Nice for a beginning > though I am not the best to judge poetry > A retired engineering lecturer

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A romantic piece:) I can tell already you love nature it is seen in your writing how you talk about rain in the sky the clouds and the sun as well as feelings.

[LazerRays]

This is very good! It's sweet :)