Your Love

Your love is the song I will never be able to write, 

Your love is the tough pain I want to feel. 

Your love is the picture I always want in my sight,

Your love is the medicine that makes me heal. 

Your love is my safe escape, your love is my youth,

That takes me away from everything I've ever known.

Easier than a lie, harder than a truth,

Your love is the beauty that has never been shown.

Reviews

[New Theory]

Beautiful poem dedicated to the person who you love, I think if you put "Our" instead of "Your". It would sound so much better, in that way it would be the whole relation between the two rather than just the couterpart. Its always a we and no me and you in the relationship.

Just my views, you dont have to change anything or get offended by it :).

Keep it going :)

[Amal N]

Not at all! I love suggestions and opinions, I am here to learn from you guys :)
Thank you :)

[New Theory]

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[An owl on the moon]

Your words remind me of how vast and deep, beautiful and wild is love. How one soul can transform our lives and give us a completely new world to live in. Thank you for sharing of this rich love...

[Amal N]

Thank you very much :)

[Neeraj V Murali]

Frankly I don't care for romantic poems, but I kinda liked this one. But why don't you try to extend it a bi further to display more emotions ? ?

[Amal N]

Thanks a lot, I might do one day :)

[Neeraj V Murali]

You are welcome! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

beautifully written and well said.

Very Romantic.

Blessings. Kindred poet

[Amal N]

Thank you very very much for reading and for your review :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome blessings. Kindred poet

[Stephen]

Amazing poem. I adore this beautiful poem which's written by an angel for a demon she's in love of. All the lines've got much depth of your soft heartbeating red heart.

[Amal N]

Again with the angels and demons lol. Thank you very much I really like your reviews :)

[Stephen]

Ha! Angels love cute demons what they bring for 'em with happiness just to see angels smile on their sizzling faces making the days more brighter than ever ...the sun makes ;P
Here's few words from a demon to a beautiful angel ..have a look :-

Your the one in the world
Beauty of the heaven
Made to live into the depth of the heart
Demons love loosen up their foots with you ..
1..2...3 yeah 5...6...and seven
You the angel came from the heaven ;)

Hope you loved my words which're written for ya praising your both talent and beauty at the same time making ya smiley ;)

[Amal N]

Haha, thank you a lot, Stephen, that was lovely :)

[Stephen]

Now that's a kind angel. Am honored to make some blushes on an angelic face making her feel refresh. It's my pleasure to bring some smile on your pretty cool white stunning face ...
...Thanks, pretty for loving the words. Your cool ;)

I'd love to read your new stuffs. Hope you'll drop 'em soon n won't put a demon on much wait .. Ha!