Intense Gaze!

Hazel brown orbs

that devours me.

His gaze

sets me on fire.

Most 

incredible sensations!

Author's Note

Just a simple poem I came up with. Let me know what you like about it! :)
Don't forget to rate/share/review. Have a great day.
-Amy

Reviews

[Marie]

Eyes like melted Maltesers could set a girl's heart on fire and you have painted a very sensual picture of how his gaze caused a volcano of sensation to erupt all over your body in this little gem, dear Amy. Lovely play with words! Thank you for sharing, dear friend. Lovely work!

[Amy R]

Thank u very much, ahah,
who wouldn't love a beautiful pair of eyes. ;)

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Amy.
Eyes are the windows to the soul and who can resist them, especially when they are brown and like melted chocolate ;)))

[Amy R]

Ahahah, true!!🤗❤❤
I can't. I always get lost in his eyes every so often.

[Marie]

SO beautiful! Thank you for sharing, Amy...

[Lyingwithlions]

Splendid piece. So much in so few word. I think FT said it best.
Eyes are the windows to our soul.
Thank you for sharing! :)

[Amy R]

I agree to that :)
thank you.

[Sultrysoul]

Nice simple but descriptive

[Amy R]

Thanks Sultry!

[Sultrysoul]

Anything you do you think are more than capable to do anything.

[zephyr]

Isn't it lovely to have these moments.

[Pryde Foltz]

There is a grammatical errata … devours should devours

[Pryde Foltz]

A fantastic short and passionate write.

[Amy R]

thank you Pryde :)

[butterfly desire]

Amy.you have a way. with words
short but powerful and beautiful

[Amy R]

thank you :) i really appreciate

[....................]

ah, the eyes...the most sensual part of the human body...well-written, Amy

[Amy R]

thanks again FT for the warm remarks!

[....................]

My pleasure, Amy

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Wowzers....this zaps!!! Great write!

[Amy R]

haha! thanks Jane :))

[wordman]

sounds like infatuation ,could n`t be love

[FaeryQueen]

best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!