Girls On The Bed And Microwaves

Girls On The Bed And Microwaves

A Poem by an I adrift

I see some girls

Some girls on the bed

Oh but they're not mine

They're never mine

But that's just fine

 

They swarm like flies in the humid air

Sticking to whatever miserable soul soul they see necessary

I love them all dearly though

They sit and read and write

I'm so taken away

I don't dare sit down with them

In this moment they are pure

Her thick black hair runs through my hands

But that's all I touch

Why not more?

 

Beep, beep, beep...left overs are finished in the microwave...

© 2008 an I adrift


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This is funny, but you can get the sense of longing in it. The appearance of the microwave caps it off well. I still haven't figured out why exactly, but it sort of reminded me of Lewis Carroll's poetry to Alice.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Lol..charming=D Very funny dude=)

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on May 21, 2008
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an I adrift
an I adrift

Toms River, NJ



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