Mind of Eden

I'm never really fully present. 

My head is never at a fixed point,

no moral compass pointing anywhere.

My mind is constantly in different places,

different directions;

But not in attempt to keep in track of real situations.

These different, lost parts of myself

tend to have an infatuation with fantasy things.

Realism conflicts with the thousand

thoughts dancing around

in my head. 

Realism is myopic. 

I only see into far, far away places. 

{(A.D.C)}

Author's Note

please tell me what you think! I'm open to all opinions.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

This was a mirror of my own soul... You have woven an explaination of some thoughts that i've never quite found the right way to say. I'm happy to have read this, for it gave me a new way to look at myself.

While I could go on and one about the inner workings of a minds thought and directions, I shan't. Instead I'll just keep this one shore and say, Awesome Ink!

Aaron - Wolfwind

[SuspectGray]

A nice contrast between reality and fantasy....though a moral compass wouldn't necessarily be a bad thing in either location.

[Fadedspeak]

I have to admit, this is highly relevant to how I feel about my own thoughts, emotions, etc., so that definitely drives these words home for me. This is an awesome piece, to save both you and I the needless rant! Good job!

[Antoñyo]

I may relate to this too much to give an accurate opinion, but I think it's good...

Thanks for the share