borrowed things

three haikus - about kisses borrowed - not stolen =]

(3 Haikus)

No - don’t kiss me
unless you're planning to
start a new habit.

Don't borrow kisses
unless you can return them
with real interest

Remember boy-O
it's all fun and games 'til
someone falls in love

Author's Note

all comments welcome

Reviews

[Timon]

These stand together well, each on their own, but they are more powerful together. I wouldn't call them three haikus, but one poem. I can see these as three pieces of cool wall art in a newlywed home.

[anais.vionet]

Thank you =]
They are kind of one poem - each stanza being a Haiku - I mention it because being a Haiku obviously effects the wording choices (the number os syllables allowed)