thinking is overrated

too much thinking can lead to... things

It's not your looks, I
like but what you are INSIDE
*talking to my fridge*

Sometimes I pretend
that I’m dying to see if
my cat would save me.

Author's Note

all comments welcome

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is so very funny and written nicely in these short stanzas, however I detect a more sombre note in its purpose, a warning not to overly complicate or globalise or problem elaborate and miss the point of life itself.

[anais.vionet]

Life can be so complicated - simplicity can be a relief =]

[Coyote Poetry]

The cat wanted to share the hidden gifts. I agree, we can overthink things. Sometimes, we must do. Be fearless and hope we don't break no bones. Thank you dear Anais for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[anais.vionet]

Thanks Coyote - it looks like you have read several pieces - how exciting! Thanks for commenting!

[Coyote Poetry]

I was glad to had found your work. You made my morning better. I enjoyed your work and you are welcome dear Anais.

[Nidhi Thakur]

This was quite witty....and this is the first poem I came across in this site....good to get a sight.

[anais.vionet]

Thank you =]

[Vari]

Something new I stopped by, Nice! and promising one. Simple yet a promising intellectual write to create laughter. Keep writing :)

[anais.vionet]

Thank you =]

[T.S. Ulmus]

You actually made me laugh aloud at both stanzas. A wit so sharp I may be bleeding... Oh crap I am! My amusement is leaking out all over the place, now I'll be depressed for days, and I have to wash the sheets.

[anais.vionet]

I was hoping to cheer someone up =]