licorice

Crush: an intense infatuation for someone unattainable or inappropriate.

(Senryus about crushes)

I'd never say to
a guy "Oh, and by the way,
have a crush on you."

I'd never stalk my
crush on the Internet - that's
what our friends are for.

Never let a guy
treat you like licorice - you're
a red gummy bear.

Author's Note

all comments welcome

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is brilliant. Thank you for writing about "crushes" in a way that's unique & popping & memorable. I get so tired of the lovelorn who pine & wail about the impossibility of some crush or other. This is the way to SHOW instead of tell that this narrator is in control, not the crush! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

A red gummy bear dear Anais? I believe, better to hold silence in the seeking of love. Ensure, love can be? or not. Good morning and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[anais.vionet]

You've HAD Gummy Bears, ya? The red ones are the best - like cherry lifesavers. Thanks Coyote =]

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Anais.