Love of Hurt

Innocent love just wanted to help others out of hatred and 'unaffection'. But it gets vanquished by those very spirits.

Eyes that sparkled with cheer.
Words that healed a hundred wounds.
Scent of a thousand spring flowers.
A soul full of joy; and
An aura that shone with light of love.
So dark beckoned her,
eerie silence became her call.
She ventured in the unknown,
to embrace the unloved,
only to be ripped 
by what she thought she owned.
Different, she sought
Indifference, she got.
She tried to caress,
but got just scars.
Placid eyes stared her,
that lightened up with her tears.
Cold hands gripped hers,
and made a brazen love.
So much love, that  ceased
to acknowledge her very existence.
She struggled to put feelings,
to get back  only ignorance.
Her bright rainbow spirit,
dulled by shades of grey.
Distraught one day,
she stepped back.
Waited for a true heart,
to heal her broken one.
In an eternal solitude,
she struggles to hold herself.

Author's Note

This is partly fiction and partly influenced by real characters. Suggestions on vocabulary, expression and portrayal of thoughts are more than welcome.

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful!!!
as far as vocabulary is concerned.........i could use some suggestions from you!!!
delicate choice of words and skillful crafting.........
going by the description.........it seems like 'she' was drawn to him more by the lust of fixing him that by actual feeling of love..........this was doomed from the beginning.

again, beautiful writing......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ananya Upadhyay]

Thank you so much for the lovely review! Means a lot! I am glad you understood the feeling behind it so well. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[samparks,sam]

you write well . I lik this