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A Poem by Lune
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The feeling of "nobody knows me"

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People know us inside out don't they?

So well that they pick us apart, piece by piece.

Everyone thinks we're a certain way,

They know us better than we do, don't they?


Always perfect, one said.

Very quiet, said the other.

She's nice, the third said.

But do you know what runs behind the curtain of my eyes?


Yet, it feels all too simple to hurt.

Am I really that weak, I ponder.

It hurts like a knife in the throat.

Yet, it's not something that should hurt.

"Everyone's watching"
"Just be happy"
"Be normal for once"
Nobody knows me.

© 2025 Lune


Author's Note

Lune
Please do not mind that the lines are repetitive. I would really appreciate suggestions and criticism.

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Excellent poem. The reality you exposed. No one can understand the other 100 percent

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lune

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review. Really appreciate it.

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Added on April 25, 2024
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Lune
Lune

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