Umi

A Poem by en skygge

The sea knows no sin.

A cold breeze touches my skin.
The waves sing me to sleep.
I see a faint light
Coming from a nearby mountain.

Oh, Sea! Take me far, far away.
Let me float in your arms.
Let me be one with you.
Set me free, set me free...

© 2016 en skygge

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yuhee

"The waves sing me to sleep. " Definitely true. I always find myself sleepy whenever I listen to the waves crashing on the shore. Great piece by the way.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

I'd say it's more of a state of tranquility than actual sleeping, so it's kind of a metaphore in thi.. read more

Papaya

I've heard that drowning is the most peaceful death. I suppose in a sense that would be very liberating.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Capaneus

:), i'm a fisherman and the surface of the ocean has always looked like a big comfy blanket. All hail Poseidon

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Agreed! I'm glad you liked it!

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Added on September 6, 2016
Last Updated on September 6, 2016

Author

en skygge

Split, Croatia

About

I don't write that often, but I sure do enjoy it. English is not my first language, so please ignore/correct any mistakes. Just one of those E.A.Poe-inspired writers. Feel free to message me or sen.. more..