pain

if it can not be faithful
You should not try to be something
in a person's life....
Because the pain of cheated it very bad

Reviews

[Umbrella jan]

Hey...Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I do not know Whether I have written Correctly and certainly you're more expert than me. but I'm happy if you like it. and of course I'll read your work with pleasure..

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "in a person's life....
Because the pain of cheated it very bad"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia