Friendship

It is the definition of Friendship to me. I wrote this during our Values Ed. Back when my friend Alyssa was still alive. *This is for her and my sisters.

Friendship is a gift

That is God-given.

A promise,

Of companionship.

A hand,

That helps you through.

It is the silver lighting,

Between the darkest of days.

It is the melody sung,

By those you love.

It is hard to find,

Yet easy to treasure.

Friendship is unending.

Unending, as the sky can be.

Author's Note

what do you think; is it crappy as i think it is?
any suggestions for me to improve?

Reviews

[ann]

Your poetry shows that you're young and an amateur... Still, I love your message, its straight from your heart... Keep on writing and surely, you will perfect it sooner than you think!