A Chant to Undo

I call upon the elements.

I call upon the wind.

The rain.

The earth.

 

Give me my wish

And wash away the pain.

Give me my wish.

And wash away the regret.

Give me my wish.

And wash away the suffering.

 

I call upon the souls.

The damned.

The struck.

The lost.

I call upon you all,

For those who wished

But never asked.

To wash away all the mistakes,

And begin anew.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Lovely piece. Nice pen upon this.

[Tai Ryens]

Wonderful poem about forgiveness! A beautiful piece, great job! Forgiveness is the one, true virtue we all should have.

[Layla J Omorose]

I read this as if it was an incantation or a quote in one of my favorite books. I could easily see this piece as something like that. Beautiful and moving. The pain and sorrow and the need for forgiveness...great job

[Tasha]

This was beautiful, and so true its something we all need to do..forgive. I loved the color and I think you forgot the h in the last line of the second stanza. It was truly beautiful. Well done.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Forgiveness is splendid and something we must all give in order to feel complete. A beautiful piece.