A Woman's Mind

A Poem by Ang Hents

11-9-09

The party is tonight

I look in despair

My dress doesn’t fit right

I need to fix my hair

I look in despair

My make-up is all-wrong

I need to fix my hair

Why is it taking me so long

My make-up is all-wrong

Everyone is waiting

Why is it taking me so long

This whole thing I’m hating

Everyone is waiting

My dress doesn’t fit right

This whole thing I’m hating

The party is tonight

© 2010 Ang Hents

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emipoemi

This is a gem beyond description. No better way to capture the horrific thought process of the female while she gets ready for a party than a pantoum. Brilliantly crafted! And perfectly tuned to the absurd. Absolutely fantastic!! Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

solo2be

great poem. I like the way you wrote this to give the reader a woman's perspective.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on December 8, 2010
Last Updated on December 8, 2010

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Ang Hents

New Iberia, LA

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I signed up on here 2006-2009 under the display name Angela[Xx]nightcatcher[xX]. Due to spam and virus attacks had to delete the email address I had used but forgot my username and password to sign ba.. more..