"Your perfect"

A Poem by Starrbitt

he tore off my mask and threw it across the sky
he caught me before i took off running to hide
"your perfect luv" he says kissing me in a tide

© 2011 Starrbitt

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Daniel88Batson

"like"

Posted 14 Years Ago

Krystal Nicole

Short but sooo meaningful!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Rose of Gondor

Very, very simple. Love the meaning. As I said, this is my FAVORITE type of love that I drabble with.

Posted 14 Years Ago

asdarkeyesclose

just enough detail and image here to carry the poem. Great expression.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Starrbitt

it kinda rhyems alot...

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on June 13, 2011
Last Updated on June 13, 2011

Author

Starrbitt

Oakhill, WV

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I love anime if you couldn't tell, vampires, writing, and evil faeries! My favorite color is purple, I like to read about creatures and zombies, and I love making my own videos. more..