Washing Laundry *new way*

For a contest. It was a challenge but I had fun writing this. Lots of fun. :]

Huge mountains of color and cloth pile high or low around me
I coughed up a shirt , maybe two , as I carry a hill to sea
I take a step , then another
down I go , found the water
a rose spit nectar into my hand
as I shove the hill under
than I grab the sky , drop it closed , turn the sun to hot , moon to full
an earthquake starts , the sea shakes and quakes , bubbles foaming at the rim

I put to much nectar in again

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

Very creative and clever, good work!

[Krystal Nicole]

Beautifully written. . . :)