Shadows won't hold hands

I don't want to hurt you
you don't want to hurt me
but still we're raising our fists
we've been over this already

my shadow follows me
your shadow follows you
there no longer holding hands
or walking through the sand today

dos the sun shine for you
it doesn't shine for me
there is no silver lining
while we're fighting the days away

Author's Note

I still have to finish this.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem as is. You told a story of two people with no peace to be found. I like the flow of thoughts and emotion. The strong ending made this poem complete. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[just is]

I like this so much, this is wonderful.

[Maya Storm]

A lot of couples stay together just to not hurt each other's feelings... Or better yet not fight so that they won't break up.

I have found that fighting for most is a way to bring the relationship closer... If you are afraid to lose then you will never win.

I absolutely loved this ending "there is no silver lining
while we're fighting the days away"

[Daisy Morgy]

So far its really good, the only thing is in the first and second the way its written changes on the last line if its meant to do that then its fine. My favorite verse was the first one xx good write