I will never leave you

In the midst of chaos and madness,
I hear you whisper over me,
"I will never leave you."

Reviews

[wordman]

the whisper of love falls to your feet

[Light and ashes]

Thank you wordman.....

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Betty Hermelee]

So glad you heard the whispers, because it would be horrible to be alone among the current chaotic times.
It puts you at ease and makes you feel loved. This a is lovely Brevity poem....says so little, means so much!
Nice write Allie

[Light and ashes]

Thank you!

[Papaya]

Wonderful to have a companion and friend like this.
So lucky. This is really nice. Short but lovely.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you.

[Papaya]

You're welcome

[Wesley Dingler]

This another excellent short poem by an amazing short poetess.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you Wesley :)

[Chris Shaw]

In times of trouble a strong faith can make a huge difference. You are fortunate to hear that voice of reassurance. Knowing He is there for you is a great comfort.

Chris

[Light and ashes]

Yes, I am..... thank you for your review and for reading.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Allie.

[Paul Bell]

The one from above always comes through when needed.

[Light and ashes]

Yes, He does, and I will not ever take that for granted.

[Hayllie]

I love when such a short written piece has so much power and meaning behind it, that it literally doesn't need any other words to follow. Such beauty in something so short. I love this. And I absolutely love hearing this personally lol

[Light and ashes]

Who doesn't? It is the most powerful and important of promises...the promise to never leave.. and the promise to never stop loving. Thank you for your review, and thank you so much for stopping by.

[Lorry]

And in between the chaos and madness, I hear the penguins whispers, I wish that weird guy would stop staring at us.
I prefer yours though, penguins can be so hurtful 😀

[Light and ashes]

This made me laugh out loud, thank you. :) Your silliness abounds, but I love it. :P

[moog-drika]

Those last 5 words can mean so much to a person. Even in the midst of chaos and madness, the line has the power to bring tranquility around you. Loved it.

[Light and ashes]

It does.... Love is the only real magic. Thank you for your thoughts.

[Unspoken poet]

short and sweet, Very nicely written

[Light and ashes]

Thank you so much.