Blue

an ode to the color blue

Blue is the color that runs through my soul. 

It is a river running long and true.

An ocean mysterious and deep.

No one truly knows what it holds.

Blue is always my favorite color.

Whether I am happy or sad.

Blue is the color of my soul.

It understands me, 

and I understand it's depths.

It captivates my gaze.

It all but makes my heart stop.

The red flames burn hot, but not as hot as blue flames.

Blue is the color of true seduction.

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Blue is my favorite color, and I think it always will be. It’s haunting, but can be so many shades. I love the way you captured the color here, and if you could describe a color this poem could work. It’s just so detailed and wonderfully written. And I love how touched on the more fiery side of blue- people tend to forget blue fire is the hottest. Blue is such a deep color, and thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece!

[Light and ashes]

Thank you!

[Amanda Renee]

what a beautiful tribute to your favorite color- in so many ways. You have inspired my write a poem about my favorite color(s) as well- thank you for this

[Light and ashes]

Cool...hope it turns out well,
you're welcome.

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Great job.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you, Thomas. It was thoughtful of you to stop by.

[Davidgeo]

Time can be colored. Color that s**t happy.

You write well, that s**t can grip a human.

[Light and ashes]

well, thank you..

[Davidgeo]

it was my pleasure

[Light and ashes]

That's nice.

[Davidgeo]

Are you certain?

[Light and ashes]

not anymore. Why? Was it??

[Davidgeo]

Nothing important. How do you feel about Modest Mouse?

[Light and ashes]

They're alright.

[Light and ashes]

strange. lol.

[Davidgeo]

Modest Mouse is good music on a Friday on a creative writing website.

[Davidgeo]

Sorry for being "strange".

[Light and ashes]

No big deal..

[Davidgeo]

modest mouse makes objectively good music anyway.

[Light and ashes]

Okay......

[Davidgeo]

... is it?

[Light and ashes]

yes. . . .

[Davidgeo]

.... indeed.

[Abhishek]

the way you described blue color is your favorite, that's really appreciable and good writing though!
best wishes
Abhishek

[Light and ashes]

kind, thank you.

[Abhishek]

please visit my page and give some review over them. it will be really appreciable.

[Brad Dehler]

Wow, truly pulled me in. This is a great treatise on that color blue, aqua, azure... Finding warmth in the coolest color. Then again it is the coolest. Not cold, like black. Outer space. No, there is light here and a beautiful hue!

[emmajoygreen]

Tis said that one should have a mountain - green, to cleanse the soul; the sky and water - blue, to refresh the spirit. In those one has the world. Your blue encloses thought in a myriad directions. Beautiful

[Light and ashes]

I love that, thank you, emma.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Dark blue is my favorite color no matter what mood I'm in.

[Light and ashes]

(smiles) cool..

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Blue is the colour of throat chakra ...need more expression...don't hold onto things needing to be said 💙

[GhostGirl]

I love the way this poem is presented! The language is not flowery, and right on spot, and the words flow really well. Great poem!

[Light and ashes]

Thank you so much!

[willweb]

I think of all of the colors, blue is the most calming and alluring though personally I lean towards green but...you can't make green without blue. : ) Nicely done, I like how this felt to read.

[Light and ashes]

Fantastic, thank you.