Sun Blade

She was intensely beautiful, 

 like being stabbed with the Sun.

Reviews

[JD Major]

Striking, not a word wasted.

[Light and ashes]

Thanks so much! :)

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

Potent imagery that oscillates the theme, the idea being injected with divinity of the sun...is a pleasing thought. Keep writing, strength & honor to you, sincerely your fellow poet in writing and life.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you so much Andrew for a wonderful review.
I appreciate you.

[Coyote Poetry]

That is a powerful lady my friend. Perfect use of words and thoughts my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Light and ashes]

Power is the feeling I was going for here.... Intensity.
Thank you for reviewing, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Now you're talking. Very good simile.
W.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you!
:)

[Aura]

Ah yes the exquisite beauty! Short but so powerful. You compare this beauty to the beautiful sun, one can imagine how striking she is!

[Light and ashes]

Thank you! :)

[Light and ashes]

Thank you! :)

[Aura]

My pleasure

[Fran Marie]

This brief piece speaks volumes in so
few words ..well done...

[Light and ashes]

Thank you!

[duff]

i really like this. So much packed in minimal wording. "Stabbed with the sun". Great writing.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you so much! :)

[Ken Simm.]

What a concept. Leading on to so much.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you.

[Patricia]

Oh, very good! Yay you! Love it

[Light and ashes]

Thank you :)