Rebirth of a stillborn

experimental poetry and deep journaling

Rebirth of a stillborn

or Rebirth (Reborn) 

I wait on the other side of dreams

and reality, waiting for existence,

waiting to be something better.

Reviews

[redd Brick Keshner]

To be both inside and outside of ourselves, recreating and rising up from ashes, even... a hint of reincarnation and much more than a mere second chance... a reboot even. So many possibilities🕊️🙏🏻

[Light and ashes]

Thank you..xx

[redd Brick Keshner]

Most welcome 🕊️🙏🏻

[Weeping willow]

A wonderful write, your words bring back the pain of when I lost a child at just 19 years old. Never to be forgotten ;-}

[Light and ashes]

I'm sorry for your loss..
Thank you for your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

A difficult topic to write about my dear friend. A powerful and worthwhile poem shared.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Very deep thoughts here. I felt like crying for all those could have beens and the pain they left behind.

Chris

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Fantastic poem
Very deep meaningful

[Light and ashes]

Thank you so much, Julie.

[Wondering Mind]

Oh my goodness.
Please don't tell me you're me from another realm...
I so relate to these words ..
Please... Peace

[Light and ashes]

Cool. Lol. Thank you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy duty emotion here. Personification of the embryo. Lydi**

[Light and ashes]

Thank you.

[willweb]

I like it, it is very cool. Keep experimenting and I will keep reading. I just like everything about this.

[Light and ashes]

cool, thank you so much.