To Que

dedicated to Que.....who died, way too young.

I can still feel, the tragedy of it all.
The lives that were taken, so needlessly.
It's
like a Stain,
in the Air,
but that's what evil deeds do.

It's like Smog,
Like pollution,
a foul feeling hanging in the air.
We all still feel it. I know we do,
because that's what evil deeds do.

Things have gotten better.
The air doesn't feel as
THICK,
with tragedy and sorrow,
but we all still feel it,
even with the rainbow 🌈,
that happened over your passing.
We all still feel it.
I know we do.
That's what evil deeds,
do.

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful and poignant. Brilliant writing.

[Light and ashes]

Brilliant... Is strong. Honestly, I don't even think this was good..but it was sincere. Thank you, anyway.

[Neville]

Filled to the very point of overflowing with sadness .. A most poignant & personal mourning song .. I too am sorry for your loss 💜

[Light and ashes]

I did, my best at the time,
or at least, I felt like it,
I missed her and she was my friend.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you, Neville, for stopping by.

[Neville]

You are far more than merely most welcome. N

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This was particularly affecting for me on a very personal note. I have a cousin who has not been with us for quite some time... she was murdered on her way home from a party her mother told her not to attend. The crime went unsolved for nearly 20 years. So, that lingering feeling that evil deeds bring, I know all to well. I named my first born daughter after her. The loss and anxiety stuck with me as if the name itself was cursed... thankfully time has proven otherwise. Funny enough, her name was Quiana. You and all those whom loved her most have my deepest condolences.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Death of a loved one is something we never truly gert over. We just accept it as best we can

[Chris Shaw]

Such sadness here for a loved one gone far too soon. Can’t help feeling the rainbows are of particular significance. I feel a tragedy has taken place. There is evil everywhere. Sorry for your loss Light and Ashes.

Chris

[Light and ashes]

Thank you, she was my friend.