Writing To You

I wrote this listening to Yellowcard- ocean avenue

 

Talking all day

Saying things

What we shouldn't like to say

But thats who we are

We are driven

We are pretty much mad

 

We talk of lots of things

Learn things

What we really don't need

But I'd twist everything around

To surprise you when your down

 

Run from our problems

Just try and make things better

Your never alone now

Not talking to you

Is something I will never be able to do

 

Reviews

[BuzzyB]

We talk a lot, we say things we shouldn't but in the end, we wouldn't stay without talking to each other. This poems says so much about the power of connecting. Sometimes, its not about what we say, at all. It's just about saying something, just anything. Loved the message here.

[Rosie C]

That is true.

A wise review indeed. Thank you

[BuzzyB]

You're welcome. It was great to read your poetry, today.

[red93]

Good to see you have put a Book together RET. I will try and work thru it over the next couple of Weeks. I like this first Piece, a good strong start is important ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Rosie C]

Again thank you for the review.

I’ll be taking a peak at more of your written work as well. I like your style, I feel a sense of familiarity towards it.

Almost like, you sound like someone I know.

Hmm..

[red93]

How interesting 😁 I take it RE Tree is a penname. If you are from Yorkshire UK, I have family up there 👍🏻

[Rosie C]

Ah, yes.

My first name is Rosie, and Tree is shortened from Crabtree.

Rosie E Crabtree.

I’m surprised to hear you have family up here. I live in Wakefield. 😉

[red93]

I have a large number of relatives in and around Sheffield, where my Sainted Mother originated from.

[Rosie C]

Ah, so that's South Yorkshire.

It's a lovely place.

[red93]

✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Brad Dehler]

I really like the flow of the poetry here and the impactful conclusion. "Not talking to you// Is something i will never be able to do". I know exactly what you mean, with particular people.

[Rosie C]

Thank you for reading my written piece.

A bit of a blast from the past, this one.

[Brad Dehler]

Yes indeed. I see what you mean. Blast from the past lol

[KAREN]

Beautifully penned! The poem had a lot of emotion and was written from the heart!

[lightsong]

your sweet poem flowed like a song to my ear, I like when simple things of life speak in a personal way that there is no doubt it came from the heart, as your piece here, but can You make the font size bigger? I had to zoom it so I can read your words.

[CStansfield]

I loved it. It provided this sense of secretive things that no one understands. It's also so true. I really like this poem and I feel like there was something you were trying to communicate between the lines, although I can't figure out just what...

[James Maines]

Excellent. I felt the emotion flowing through the poem... keep up the good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Felt like a conversation that become more needed with each line. Secrets can hold people together. But we need adventure and dreams to escape the world. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote