I hear...

I hear the purr of the sea

I hear the whisper of the stars

The silence of those who do not die

I hear the silence of those who yell

And the screams of those who are silence 

As they have no voice

I hear the voice of the ones that sing

To break the silences

Of those who died before us 

 

Reviews

[pal]

Awesome. Short and sweet.
Pal

[angelina neves]

thank you Pal

[Richard McLin]

Supernatural, not any easy thing to create short poem on, but you have done so masterfully. Great job.
-Richard.

[angelina neves]

thank you very very much for your appreciation!

[Helen Crutchett]

Absolutely stunning! A magical write indeed.

Helena :)

[angelina neves]

I'm glad you like it! Thank you very much

[wordman]

we can feel and hear the spirits if we try
you painted a great image

[angelina neves]

thank you very much!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful piece here.. the sounds of present and past come together quite nicely as the sea tells many stories of life..nice work

[angelina neves]

thank you so much for reading and commenting! It is lovely to know

[MOON]

Poignant and beautiful Angelina,the contradiction and the understanding of life ...

[angelina neves]

thank you so very much for reading and living such a beautiful comment!

[Tony Jordan]

Sometimes all it takes is to know that you've been heard to keep going.
I liked the 'circle of life' sentiment in this one Angelina.

[angelina neves]

Thank you for reading and comment!
I agree it is always something like the "circle of life"...

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. I spend a lot of time by the sea. If we listen. Many stories to be learn. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you Angelina for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[angelina neves]

thank you for reading and giving feed back!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Angelina.