Balanced symbol

Albert's Poetry Cafe - CINQUAIN CHALLENGE! ~ with Helena

Yin-Yang

Black-white, strong-weak 

I love the middle dot

Big or small or male and female

Equal

Author's Note

TO WRITE A CINQUAIN: Traditional Cinquain
line 1 - 2 syllables
line 2 - 4 syllables
line 3 - 6 syllables
line 4 - 8 syllables
line 5 - 2 syllables

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

I like this a lot. As a newbie to this form of writing I enjoyed the whole feeling these words aroused in me.
There is the sense of being complete - of being one - being equal.

To my mind a poem worthy of winning this competition.

Well done.

Jen

[Wondering Mind]

Ah yes! The Cinquain, and so wonderfully executed in balance within the balance of our existence. In my opinion, it is the wee spot that makes us human. Lovely.

[Gandré]

Hello my dear Angi

This is a wonderful version to see the symbol for yur composition offers emphasis on "equal". I love your cinquan. Also the colors > red for woman. What a great idea.
Unfortunately I technically am not able to rate for I communicate with blackberry. I shall do this when on PC. My PC has a severe damage I don t know what I am going to do with it but I am also technically not able to read your reviews {except the first line}. I thank you in advance for them� Much love yours L

[fireblossom]

I worked on Cinquain's as a writing student. I love the form. You do so very well with it here. Not only do you hit the steps you also inject humanity or self...very nice.

[Gandré]

ha ha
this is wonderfuL !!!


a poetess on her own, yet literary admitting she earns the praise of notable literary figured throughout Africa.......................and the world. Fantastic.