Passion to live!

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ with Tovli - a story using all ten words, with no less and no more than ten sentences. Or, a poem using all ten words with no more and no less than ten lines (10 words in red)

 

OpenedBankrupt dissipated life’s goals for gold

                  advancing tumbling like a blind drunk to the uncertain Future

he saw thousands in a Poetics’ Walk,with navy-blue words buildings  

                 that hang all over them in a most strange puzzling way

 

Either he was dreaming or the world was real going insane

 

-          How can you be laughing and singing in the middle of this mess?

He asked offended and intrigued

 

-          The magic awareness of the unlimited journeys of life.

They answered smiling, inviting him to join

                   their awaken passion to live!

 

 

Reviews

[Tovli]

a jumble of scenery and thought--it dances like a little ballerina. enjoyed! tovli

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A great challenge entry. Well done.