Knock on my Door

I want to feel a man's sweet touch,
His lips on mine, I know that much.
For my body long teased,
Now hungers the pleasures of being pleased.
Its been so long since my body has felt,
His sweet shiver as I unbuckle his belt.
My passion and lust now overflow,
For the moment of bliss, and the sweet afterglow.
So don't be affraid to come to my room,
Afterall I'm your bride and you are my groom.

Don't be scared to knock on my door,
And make love to me, on my bedroom floor.
For even if love has long left our heart's,
My body still shows your tender bite marks.
Take me again even if its for lust,
For my need for release is now but a must.

Tomorrow we will regret what tonight we have done,
But dont worry about it, by then I'll be gone.

Reviews

[MachinaWriter]

Wow. I love how this poem shifts. It starts as something erotic, tantalizing and teasing...then it shifts to something suggesting more, something deeper, only to wrap it all up with deep regret and a parting glance. Like the timeline of so many marriages, all in a few short paragraphs. Many poems that speak about these types of things sound too contrived, too forced, and so lose any appeal and become as emotion-filled as a cheap porno. This, however, flowed effortlessly and played with expectations and told a story. Very well done.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A tryst between two lovers described in a canter of a poem with spirit and 'gay abandon'. Live life for the moment!

[Angie G]

Life is but a moment which demands to be lived with no regrets. Thank you John!!! Happy writing!!

[Angie G]

Tyvm Salinger.. sometimes we have to open our eyes the realize we can't hold in forever, but hope for one last night to remember..

[paul sal.....]

Very poingant telling of the final fleeting flicker of love, and then goodby

[Angie G]

Thank you Wordman.. tacky?? Maybe, but as with all writers I write with an open heart and I let my soul do the writing.

[wordman]

a beautiful write of passion

[Angie G]

Thank you.. I try to look at the bigger picture of it all.