Darkness

We have all welcomed it to our chambers.

I've never called upon you
But tonight I gladly do.

A game of seduction if you please
Frantic torture I do seize.

Body naked and alone
Make you're misery my throne.

I invite you to my bed
Mouthwatering temptation ahead.

Taste the nectars of my smoldering body
For tonight I'm feeling naughty.

Ignite my darkest hidden desires
Bring them alive like ragging wildfires.

Take me time and time again
In this poison streaked night I let you win.

Oh Sweet orgasmic culmination!
Exquisite torturous exhilaration!

Sunlights tendrils touch my skin
Evil darkness, until we meet again.

Reviews

[Relic]

The message is clear and the darker side of passion appears to tantalize with excitement.

My only critique is that the poem doesn't sound natural. Rhyming poems are not easy to pull off. Perhaps it has to do with forced rhymes but I can't say.

[Angie G]

I get where u r coming from.. And I thank your honesty. I will take that into consideration on my coming writes. Happy writing!

[Relic]

You're welcome. I always struggle with rhyming poems. :)

[the one inside]

There are things no shape can take and no touch can tease, a darkened erosion sure allows that keep

[Angie G]

Thank you my friend for your kind review. Happy writing!

[micahdrew]

How artistic you are honestly I have just read a few of poems and I'm sure to read more. Your words are like a trace. How well constructed and memorizing

[Angie G]

Thank you so much for your kind words. Happy writing!

[wordman]

it sounds like a woman calling you to her bed,she is ready fora night of pleasure,a great write

[Angie G]

Or she is inviting her darkest thoughts to dance the dance of love and hate with her. I appreciate your comments as always Wordman for u are the Angel of words. Ty.

[wordman]

you`re welcome angel of words,wow

[Jayden]

it fits together nicely and weirdly reminds my of shakespere

[Angie G]

I'm no Shakespeare, but thank you for you're kind review.