Star-Crossed

Once I was wishing on a star,

Because I thought we were star-crossed.

But I guess I was wrong,

And you were just fooling me all along.

 

We once were star-crossed,

But we are just an unfinished embossment.

That was never started in a way it was supposed to be,

A love that was not meant to be.

 

That love was just a dream,

A dream that never came true.

Now like the morning dew,

It is gone.

 

Hoping that in my next love,

I will find my star-crossed.

The one that was meant to be,

And not repeating history.

Reviews

[Eddie Gao]

So romantic Sarugi...

[SaRuGi]

:D thank you! :D

[Annie N.]

I love the first two lines of the poem especially.

"Once I was wishing on a star,
Because I thought we were star-crossed."

Are not we all "forbidden lovers in the stars"... GREAT WRITE

[SaRuGi]

Thank you~~ ;D im going to try and change the rest sometime soon.... :P