The End

Like a million abstracts, 

Sticking in my mind. 

You're the one that lingers, 

lingers for the end. 

Like a thousand wishes,

Clasping in my heart. 

You're the one that came true , 

Came true till the end. 

Like a hundred words, 

remaining in my hand.

You're the one that stays,

stays in the end. 

Like a ton of feelings,

mixing me emotion. 

You're the one that is pure, 

As pure as my love to you. 

Author's Note

Please tell me what i can do to make it better. Thank You. Any suggestions would be appreciated. :)

Reviews

[Shauna Jacqueline Ander..]

It's good. The flow could do with a little tampering, it seems a bit jittery and the words don't reciprocate that. Other than that nice job.

[SaRuGi]

thank you! i'll keep that in mind the next time :)