and she asked

and she asked

and she asked ... 'are you a good man?'

i gave pause 

and she asked ... 'do you want me?'

i gave pause

and she asked ... 'will you love me forever?'

i gave pause

and she asked ... 'do you hear what i'm say'in?'

i gave pause

and she asked ... 'do you love me?'

i gave pause

and she asked ... 

i gave pause as i surely did not know

and i gave pause as i surely did not know

Reviews

[Temperance]

Pauses speak volumes! This is similar to “He didn’t ask”. Nice!

[keith]

KOOL! .....

[Neville]

there is much to be said for gut feelings, hunches and occasionally reflex responses .. but slip in the occasional well placed, strategic pause and bingo ................ N :)

[keith]

it comes naturally ... i am not one to settle down

[Chris Shaw]

Honesty is important. The pauses were honest. Some would have lied. She might not have liked the pauses. That's where you took me.

Chris

[keith]

it is a real interaction from many years past
i have never been 'in love' nor do i believe i can