come

come

come

take from me that you want

i have much baggage

all my own

there is much 

i have yet 

to 

understand

come 

take from me

lessen my burden

give to me the pleasure

of open opportunity

let me walk with life

rather than stumbling 

back and forth

in mistake in error in bad choice

come

take from me

i have much baggage

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Excellent line you wrote. 'Give to me the open pleasure of opportunity'! Some we miss. Some we get. Some we kiss, some we regret ... 'cause we missed.

[Chris Shaw]

I've never met a person yet who doesn't have some baggage which can weigh them down from time to time. I guess though that some have more than their fair share. That sadly is life. Stuff isn't evenly distributed. Some people get the lot, others nothing. A little compassion can go a long way. That's where I travelled to Keith.

Chris

[keith]

that's a good direction eloquently said
me, it's a i have plenty don't bring yours don't leave yours and it will be ok