the star nourhan

the star nourhan

the star nourhan

i am comfortable 

for i see the truth and beauty 

of your words 

it matters not 

the manner you write 

i hear what you say 

what a beautiful gift 

you offer me 

on this last day of our year 

you gave to me comfort 

in way i have not known 

thank you 

light of angels 

the star nourhan

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I do not know the star nourhan but what I do know is that she made an impact on you. I don't think we are talking stars in the sky here. Her words had meaning for you. This is a tribute to her.

Chris

[keith]

never have i been 'in love'
but should i had she would be the one
the most influential being of my life and a most treasured dear friend of the last 60 years

[William Michael Reeves]

Wasn't sure where in the universe that star was, so I searched it. She bears a resemblance to someone on Facebook. Perhaps you write of another poet who was an hourglass, and the year's worth of words has passed. Sands of thought in a pile of conclusion.

Not capitalizing the I's was distracting.

[keith]

close enough ... i will never tell i have been sworn to secrecy ... if i told ya ...

no caps is how i roll!
maybe yes maybe no
best not set clock by it