Broken pens

Broken pens  

Broken pens

tattered page

words unheard

ideas clashing

crashing

loudly loud

Between the voices

glamping in my brain

and the constant static of annoyance

no wonder said they

it's quite simple

he is definitely he

there ain't nothing right left in me

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Hey here over you

with no clue

aren't we all

just ants

marching marching

marching two x two

Look gretle bread crumbs

no hansel those are 

those are dead butterflies

that flew here

all the way

from spain

The big bad boy bad began to play

a one legged man 

did his hip did his hop

I do like the sound

of your tune said he

kool it's not ours

we found it this morning

after we crawled out from under our rock

that had been trashed with colored confetti

tossed like fast food drive thru

evidence left roadside

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Somethings just because are irritating

am i alone here solitaire

i hear tell some people see stupid people

everywhere

nothing like getting your boots

pissed on especially when you ain't

wearing them

Its all gonna be ok weed hopper

uncle gonzo will help watch over you

scuse me while i kiss the sky

bye bye so long

Reviews

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Ahhh, I just love these type of writes! "Aren't we all just ants"! Great using!
And I LOVED the song! You have a great taste.
"am i alone here solitaire
i hear tell some people see stupid people everywhere" woah
Great work sir!

[keith]

me too imagine that
this is what i do best FREE VERSE

i have been called an 'audiophile'
lover and collector of recorded music
i have working 8 tracs cassettes 45s & 33 1/3
and many old school players that work very well
next to art music is my favorite poison HA!
art iz muzik muzik iz art!

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous grit in this one. Powerful.

[keith]

always a pleasure when those with 'real grit' swing in for a shout out
my friend it is you that has 'grit'
me i'm just a huckleberry lounging in endless imagination called free verse
don't cost nothin it's free just waiting for all to grab the gold ring while riding your fav steed of life's fukin merry-go-round