DEZ BALLS!

not mine ... hiz! DUMBAZZ!

DEZ BALLS!

not mine 

HIZ BALLS!

WHAT? our COMMANDER of WAR? 

a national disgrace of inept magnitude! 

BAD ATTITUDE? NOPE ... BAD RAISING! 

whatzhisname 

is only 

another delusional week-end warrior 

gone ballistically wrong! 

TOO MUCH STARCH in his tighty-whities! 

but he and cadet bone-spurs 

are a true match made in heaven ... 

NOT my heaven THEIR HEAVEN!

 

a more-bread-than-s**t kinda life 

when reality squats! 

TOO MANY OF MY FRIENDS MY COMRADS IN ARMS 

are forever chiseled in my generation's 

UGLY MEMORIAL WALL!

always another fuk'in wall ...

Author's Note

it's past time to STOP ALL OUR WARS!
this country OUR country iz a FUKIN BULLY!

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A super poem hardhitting and strong! I admire the last stanza lament, yes your buddies shouldn't be on a memorial war, only if demicracy could stop killings ah. Kudos!

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