Spring tales

live in the moment..

There's a story

to be told.

flowers are 

blooming in my heart

all around today, 

like never before.

I can't take my eyes off

those pretty

magnolias, sakuras

and the graceful white lilies.

they are dancing

in extreme joy,

wearing white

and light pink colors

as if there were

no tomorrow.

spreading joys

of spring,

telling tales

of life.

they are whispering,

in my ears;

 

ride this

present moment,

breathe to your fullest,

smile with your heart wide,

nothing lasts forever,

we only journey to endeavor,

so why worry

for what you don't have?

just dance in glory

for what you have.

one day, we all

will fall,

so, why not bloom like spring?

joyfully live now,

the end is just a thing

and tomorrow, we 'll see, anyhow.

- AH, 04/20/2025

Reviews

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o captain! my captain! I always love the peace that your poems carry, it's definitely a safe space. You always speak with endless hope, like a child who always smiles."as if there were no tomorrow."
"so why worry
for what you don't have?
just dance in glory
for what you have."
Your words are certainly one of the best hopes that spring can bring. The flowers are now ready to bloom. You have no idea how important the hope you spread is!
Thank you my friend!

[A.H.]

we all need hope, and you are so right, Spring is the season of hope, it spreads the joy and brings us hope, costs nothing to be hopeful :)
Thank you so much for your thoughts on this write, always wonderful to hear you, my friend. you're most welcome, B.

[Buddhistboy73]

An interesting and uplifting poem ...:)

Kinda reminds me of my own style in a way actually...

A positive injection like spring blooming joyfully.........celebrating the good....

Feel free to stop by and check out one of my poems..

BB73

[A.H.]

Thank you for reading and sharing those thoughts. Appreciate it much! Sure, will stop by to check out your poems :) Take care!

[Fia Naturie]

Oh, this is lovely. why not bloom now. No one is promised tomorrow.

[A.H.]

Thank you Fia for reading and reviewing. Appreciate it!

[carl]

behold the Lillie's of the field - very reminiscent of this admonition to live in the moment with what has been given and rejoice in the mercies that envelope us. - nice read glad I came by - carl

[A.H.]

so sorry, for the late response on the review. I'm glad to hear your thoughts, thanks for stopping by, carl.

[red93]

Great stuff A.H., and look how yr language and command is improving now you are writing Free Verse. Nice clear structure as well. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[A.H.]

Thank you for your words and thoughts on this write, red. Appreciate it!

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful and poignant. Great work.

[A.H.]

Thank you much, Thomas. Appreciate it.

[Belle]

This is so warm and full of life.
It feels like standing under a sky of soft blossoms, letting their petals and their wisdom fall all around you. The tone is tender but uplifting, like a friend gently reminding you to live now, love now, dance now, because the future is just another mystery waiting its turn.

I love how the flowers are not just scenery here.
They speak and celebrate, almost like little wise souls of their own.
The message hits in a real, honest way, without being heavy:
embrace what you have
because the beauty of today is its own miracle.

[A.H.]

Thank you Belle for this review. I really appreciate your thoughts and perspectives.

[Betty Hermelee]

The beauty you feel for the flowers in spring is like the beauty you feel in your heart…. you’ve intertwined the love of nature with the love of life…. your piece has so much hope weaved through it…..let us live for today, for we do not know what tomorrow will bring…….lovely
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷

[A.H.]

Thank you Betty for such a lovely thoughtful review. I really appreciate this much !

[Betty Hermelee]

My pleasure!🌷🌷🌷Warmly,B🌷

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your attitude is refreshing and most contagious, Abhilash. The joys of spring and the pageantry it brings are so abundant. I find it invites us to live in the now, in the moment that is here, and embrace the glory around us. Thank you for such a lovely offering!

[A.H.]

you're most welcome, Kelly. Thank you much for this review and so glad to hear your thoughts.